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You have been called "ugly."
You have been called "weak."
You have been called a "failure."
You have been called all of these things.
But at least you're not dead yet.

You've still got your life ahead of you.
You've still got all these years to cherish.
You've still got a lot to live for.
You might be on life support...
...but you're not dead yet.

All these years you spent in isolation.
All these years you hide away somewhere dark.
All this time you think about the odds.
But even while that appears to be the case,
You're not dead yet.

You have cancer in your whole body.
You have mesothelioma and bronchitis.
You have six days left to live.
You're running out of time.
But you're not dead yet.

Look at what all you've done with your life.
Take a look in the mirror.
Tell the whole world what you see.
Believe in the fact that there's an afterlife,
Because you're not dead yet.
This took me all of six minutes to write. Enjoy!
Doge 


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JustFallLove Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Student General Artist
QUQ It so sweet and sad...it very great poem O//w//O
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TheSkull31 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks. :D
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JustFallLove Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Student General Artist
ur welcome:D
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TheSkull31 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Student General Artist
:D
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katsumi-pyon Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Reading this during my chemotherapy session made me quite emotional. ; u ;

So lately I've been down in the dumps, feeling useless, thinking there's no future for me. But of course... I'm not dead yet. 0 u 0
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TheSkull31 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Student General Artist
Indeed. And by the way, you've got plenty of time left to make up for lost time, so as long as you maintain a positive attitude, you'll do fine.
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cornybeatles Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
So amazing I couldn't have said it any better man
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TheSkull31 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks. :D
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Mistercool38 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Thank you so much for writing this, I often feel useless at times, I have no talents, I often hide and crawl and cry, it's nice to find a poem I can relate to. Hug 
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TheSkull31 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Student General Artist
You're welcome. :D
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