Second Place Commission For GameKarim

Perhaps you should add a bit of an outline for the eyes just to emphasize the eyes more <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> Is that an Adam's apple I see? Great job with that one <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> The neck looks a bit too long. Shorten it about half of its size. The shoulders look slanted like the right one is almost dropping. I advise you to draw a straight line just to give you a guide on the shoulder levels <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> His left hand looks smaller compared to his right. The legs need some work too. What kind of pants is he wearing? If it is jeans, then I get it that it has some creases but we can still improve those creases and get those legs straight <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> The shoes are quite small for him. Lengthen it a bit just so it can match his height.

Now, I'm not a professional but I tried to point out whatever I can, whatever I know. I do hope my words do not sound harsh. I hope my comment helps you <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>