GodKin, Page 6

its kinda confusin how u drew it at first i didn't rlly understand it bt i figured it out eventually ^^ i noticed u draw back and forth but one tip. a comic is made to read easily and not to figure out how to read it. all comics are from right to left or left to right. u can also direct the reader towards the next scene with an arrow or something x3 thats less confusing and so, more enjoyable ^^ 

i would also study a lil anatomy if i were u and redraw ur characters over and over again because i only recognized them by the color scheme also in different positions x3 it just looks like in the front view that they would be tired from standing like a western cowboy who is ready to brawl for a while x'D what i want to say is that they are rlly static x ux 

i dun try to discourage u but there are some tips ^^ 

ohs and one last tip. try to color in small circular movements instead of quick straight strokes x ux then it looks smoother and less messy ^^